Young gun

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Thanks.That was really fast!

The whole point was to get the logic behind the creation of religion,and comforting the thought of death seemed the most plausible one.Therefore,it would be interesting to know what other ...

I would really appreciate if you could review dint do as well as its first version. title:Strange love III-The butterfly effct Thanks.

Thanks for the feedback.If possible, I may be able to work on X's role a little more and try to improve the story.

I really don't know whether this has been raised by someone before but I'll ask it anyways. Did religions with the concept of God come into existence because of death?In ...

This story was one like out of the movie scenes. Interesting,gripping and the classical dramatic end.A well chosen concept with some brilliant storytelling. Just before your story, tell the readers ...

That was one amazing reading. Original or not,the theme and its execution was just brilliant.A few incidents of forced rhyme may have arisen but that really is no stain on ...

I probably know what you must think of me now, but before I depart I must leave with my final act III which may or may not change your mind……… ...

6.5 on 10 The Illusionist

The possible reasons for not writing could be many: Your thinking too much.Too much effort to make the writing perfect results in poor work or no work at all.The question ...

This was something truly enjoyable. Like everyone must have pointed out before,your presentation skills of situation is definitely beyond ordinary writers.Describing normal situation and not loosing t

Quite good for a first poem. The technique of building the climax was just brilliant.The element of surprise was very nice and the overall presentation was brilliant. The last line ...

“The best of all is when the nemesis stars falling for you”, I said, smirking at him. Yes, he knew what I was talking about. His crush from high school. ...